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A Beautiful Poem

Member John McClure Jr sent me this poem that his brother Patrick wrote.

There was a great nation under God

whose citizens became lazy and voted for a fraud.

His words were carefully chosen, a refined speaker he was,

so many were blinded by all the buzz.

The media was complicit with the powers that be,

to conceal his past from you and me.

He has lectured and pointed out those with a different view

he feels his destiny is to rule and regulate you.

Wrong became right and right became wrong

as millions of sheeple joined his throng.

He has divided this nation; white, black, rich and poor

and done it with earnest as if to settle a score.

He has rewarded those who lift not a finger

and put the successful through the ringer.

As the days have worn on and the seeds have been sewn,

the sheeple have forgotten how to think on their own.

Those who have opposed him are ridiculed and scorned

but silent they are not and so they are warned.

The Founders writings are not taken to heart

and he has given them new meaning right from the start.

History has taught us one thing for sure,

those who don't learn it are deemed to repeat it for sure.

As this nation moves ever closer to the brink

the sheeple must awaken and stop drinking the drink.

If this nation sounds familiar then stand up now, our time is due

this nation can't wait, so act today. It is the republic I love the US of A!!!

written by Patrick McClure

John wrote this to me:

 

I am an East coast transplant living in Orange Cty, CA where I am proud to say there are a lot of us that feel this way. It is difficult living on the "left" coast, with it's Socialist ways but thankfully there is such a large presence of like-minded people that at least try to put people straight. I am a 50 year old university student (that's right 50) for the first time ever and attending the University of California-Irvine. I never really wanted to believe that there really were Socialist leaning professors in our universities but now I know that for sure. I have had several professors admit they are members of the Dem. Socialist Party and I can say for sure that they have never had a student like me before. Since I am older than most of my professors I speak to them as individuals and not some kind of authoritative figure and it infuriates some of them. The best they can do is to privately meet with me and we consentually "agree to disagree". It still does not silence me in their classes though if I hear something that is so completely wrong. The younger students do not know what to think until we meet and talk after class and they see I am just a regular student with a different point of view. Being older I tell them everything they are hearing has already been said before and I have heard it firsthand, first by the Carter administration then by the Clinton administration. I think I have become the new Socialist university standards worst nightmare, someone they cannot influence with their so obviously misguided propaganda. I urge all older people to take classes at a community college and let their voices be heard before the left completely brainwashes these young people. There are still some professors who do not follow the Marxist points of view and as a result are not very popular with the other professors but I seek them out and sit in on lectures if I am in between classes.

 

John McClure

I have linked John's profile page at the top of this discussion, so please leave him a comment as to what you think about his brothers poem. It can probably be said that I think we all feel the way these two Patriots feel. ~ Melony

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  • Awesome poem Jhn. Congratulations to Patrick for his acuity and his accuracy in poetic format!
  • The "only" reason this nation is still free is because it's WE THE PEOPLE hold America together IN SPITE of our government & not because of it! Stand up and together America! It's going to be a very uphill climb to take America back "BECAUSE" of our exisisting "Progressive Socialist Party's" very COMMUNISTIC decisions made in the last four years. WAKE UP AMERICA & FIGHT BACK!!!

  • Sir- The poem is beautiful and so are you.  I am 70 and recall much more so you may rest assured that meany meany more folks will enjoy and share.

  • FOX News should show this........Great Poem.......Thank You!

  • Excellent!

  • YES! Amen. TY!!!

  • Thanks.

  • Great Poem!  Tells it like it is!

  • Very well written. Thanks for posting it.

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